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Nombre: Anónimo · Fecha: 19/01/18 23:20 · Capítulo: Capítulo 4
Contiiiiiiii xfavor, oye si llega a ganar sasuke y se queda con naruto a shikamaru lo puedes poner con neji me gusta mucho el shikaneji si llega ganar sasuke la verdad no se si será así me gusta tu historia


Nombre: Areli · Fecha: 19/01/18 00:55 · Capítulo: Capítulo 4

Genial continua me encanto como va al principio no comprendí varias cosas ahora si espero el siguiente capítulo



Nombre: lee123 · Fecha: 18/01/18 07:38 · Capítulo: cap 1

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Nombre: NAMI -SAMA · Fecha: 18/01/18 05:32 · Capítulo: Cap 3

Me encantooooo es muyy adictivo de leer me encanta espero que continues ;)



Nombre: firebell · Fecha: 18/01/18 04:22 · Capítulo: Capítulo 4

wuaahh! como amo este fic! pense que no continuarias!

naruto es tan tierno! lo amo! 

uyy! ademas parece haber tres valientes cozaones en cuanto a pretendientes! que lindo!

sigue escribiendo!



Nombre: Acauario · Fecha: 31/07/16 01:47 · Capítulo: Cap 3

Haaaaaa me encanta tu fic. Eapero el siguientw capirulo con ans8as



Nombre: ara vylema · Fecha: 24/04/16 01:01 · Capítulo: Cap 3

Woow hola soy nueva y permiteme decirte que tu historia esta muy interesante  :) enserio :O woow w esta genail en tu cara Sasu jaja XD :P

Solo espero conti :) y espero a kurama jeje XD



Nombre: firebell · Fecha: 23/04/16 01:27 · Capítulo: Cap 3

wooow! que interesante, los primeros tres capitulos y ya me siento atraida por este fic.



Nombre: Anónimo · Fecha: 23/04/16 00:55 · Capítulo: cap 1

Interesante, interesante, me gusta, me gusta mucho :v


Actualiza pronto!!!!!!



Nombre: Dulce · Fecha: 13/12/15 07:23 · Capítulo: Cap 2

O mi dios primera vez que comento en uno de tus fics continualo pronto ploz No lo abandones me encanta aunque solo sean apenas dos capitulos me gusta como se va desarrollando la trama, jejej na Si le recomiendo a leer a alguien de mi familia este fic Si les anda dando algo 😀😁😊 saludos que estes bien.



Nombre: FourSN · Fecha: 12/12/15 20:00 · Capítulo: cap 1

Por fin la conti



Nombre: yumekoi · Fecha: 12/12/15 19:49 · Capítulo: Cap 2
Yeiiii Yeiiii Yeiiii Yeiiii n.n/ actualizo actualizo la mujer porfin actualizo yo ya pensaba que lo habías abandonado.
Mi querer la conti y que sigas actualizando y rapido.


Nombre: bonbon · Fecha: 12/12/15 07:29 · Capítulo: Cap 2

Hola me encanta la historia esta buenisima espero la continues muy pronto besitos



Nombre: jey chan · Fecha: 09/11/15 22:45 · Capítulo: cap 1

Holaaa. ^~^/ me encantan todas tus obras son muy interesantes porfa espero que las sigas actualizando no se que sería si las abandonas T-T por cierto muy buena esta historia, me encantó porfa siguela escribiendo*-* gracias ^°^

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Nombre: yumekoi · Fecha: 10/09/15 20:05 · Capítulo: cap 1
Wowww, por favor continualo no nos dejes así ya tienes 3 meses que no lo actualisas este fic es muy bueno quiero la conti porfís shiiiiiii :3.
PD:esa voz en la cabeza de naru es Kurama?,me gustaria que tambien hubiera un poco de Kurama x Naruto.


Nombre: Alteasora · Fecha: 28/07/15 18:36 · Capítulo: cap 1

Hola, siento decir que ya me estoy cansando de esperar... actualiza xfavooooor TwT!!!!!!!!!!! POr lo que más quieras pero no estés tanto tiempo sin actualizar!!!!!!!!!!!! ='(



Nombre: kokana · Fecha: 25/07/15 13:40 · Capítulo: cap 1

contiiiii 



Nombre: ABI:3 · Fecha: 15/06/15 22:05 · Capítulo: cap 1

Abi: Hola :3 soy Abi n.n/

Lia: No me digas (sarcasmo mode on)

Abi: Si! yo soy Abi n.n (5 min despues...) no seas mala T.T (alfin entendio)

Lia: ya, ya quieres chocolate n.n

Fabi: ammm creo que se les olvido porque estamos aqui

Abi y Lia: (ignorando a Fabi)

F: bien como me ignoran yo le mandare el Review a la autora diciendo que borre su fic

A y L: Nooooo! (quitando a Fabi amablemente es decir golpendo y mandando a volar a Fabi)

A y L: bien ya que la cosa amorfa de por alla no molesta mas te queremos decir... Nos gusta muchooooooo tu fic, es hermoso, sensual y comestible...

F: encerio comestible? saben lo que escriben

A y L: sip, bueno como decia seria genial que lo continuaras y Fabi esta resentido porque segun el le ganaste su idea de hacer un fic de Naruto inspirado en gakuen alice.

F: no estoy resentido

A y L: esperamos que lo continues o si no (sonrisas amenazantes)

F: yo terminare el fic y me llevare todo el credito

A y L: aparte, Abi acabara con toda la comida del universo incluyendo dulces, Lia acabara con el yaoi y el resentido cumplira su amenaza n.n

L: bueno omitamos lo del yaoi

A: pero asi sentira presion

F: no soy un resentido

A y L: bueno adioooooos n.n

F: no me ignoren T.T



Respuesta del autor:

holis a los 3 ^^/ la verdd me a gustado su comentari hehe aun que fabi me dejo asi o.o perdona x adelantarme pero esq esa idea me estaba romdando en la caneza y tenia q sacarla, bueno me gustaria q leyeran mis otros fic a ver si les gusta,, tratare de no demorar en actualizar haha ya q me qmenazaron, me pasa seguido beno en fic gracoas x leerlo n.n 



Nombre: Naima · Fecha: 10/06/15 01:45 · Capítulo: cap 1

ni se te ocurra borrarlo porque ya amo este fic, lo puse por face y lo vuelvo arrepetir por aqui amo el shikanaru, shikamaru es el tercer personaje q me gusta emparejar con naru :3 (en realidad tengo muchos porq me gustan emparejar pero en mi top esta shika :3)


amo los fic de fantasia los que tienen alice solo es don o tienen como una especie de demonio adentro, me parece q naru tiene uno :3 kuranaru :3 si estoy loca xD me gusto que metieras a inoichi n.n


pobre naru u.u no se pudo despedir bien de sus abuelos pero no se porq me parecen q van a salir mas adelante ya que inoichi se sorprendio cuando le dijo q es uzumaki o talvez era porq no le pudo leer su pensamiento n.n


bueno me despido repito amo ya este fic continualo n.n y no te deprimas asi me pasa por lo general pero me acuerdo q puedo ver harda de naruto y sasuke y se me pasa xD (realmente solo un poco pero toda ayuda es valida) n.n cuidate, bye :)



Respuesta del autor:

me alegra muxo q te haya gustado, hehe gracias x comenta y tratare de actualizar lo mas pronto posible:)



Nombre: Arairy · Fecha: 09/06/15 00:17 · Capítulo: cap 1

OoO.... es pechocho... ari queye oto capitulo .... -3-... jejej ok no xp... pero de verdad veritas que  me gusto



Respuesta del autor:

hehe, me alegra que te haya gustado, y muxas gracias x comentar >_< 



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