Amor Yaoi
Fanfics yaoi en español

Reviews para La Traición

Nombre: cyntia (Logado) · Fecha: 13/09/17 07:31 · Capítulo: Epílogo

no me gusto



Nombre: cyntia (Logado) · Fecha: 13/09/17 06:48 · Capítulo: Capítulo 28

y obvio el imbesil lo perdonara.....que idiotas son estas historias



Nombre: Cecy (Anónimo) · Fecha: 31/08/17 23:15 · Capítulo: Epílogo

Me encanto 😍😊😉.



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 31/08/17 00:29 · Capítulo: Epílogo

Que bueno que al final todo terminara bien para esta bella familia y ahora puedan disfrutar de su felicidad.



Nombre: SotenSama (Logado) · Fecha: 24/08/17 19:45 · Capítulo: Capítulo 43
Esraba almorzando y se me fue por el camino viejo. Como q no lo cono.se q locura


Nombre: midas kaseiyo (Logado) · Fecha: 24/08/17 18:25 · Capítulo: Capítulo 43

*O*



Nombre: Uchiha Berenice (Anónimo) · Fecha: 24/08/17 13:42 · Capítulo: Capítulo 43

Kiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Contiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiii 

Me en canto



Nombre: sukisasunaru50 (Logado) · Fecha: 24/08/17 13:40 · Capítulo: Capítulo 43

Se olvidó de de sasuke o tiene amnesia?? O sólo dije espero que sea lo último! Me alegra que se salvar espe4o el epílogo, Saludos nos estamos leyendo. 



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 24/08/17 05:03 · Capítulo: Capítulo 43

A pesar que no lo reconozca, es más que bueno que Naruto ya despertó,  ojalá pronto puedan estar todos juntos en su hogar disfrutando de su felicidad. 



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 24/08/17 04:56 · Capítulo: Capítulo 42

Por lo menos tienen una oportunidad de que tanto Naru como sus bebés se salven, ojalá puedan lograrlo.



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 24/08/17 04:44 · Capítulo: Capítulo 41

Espero que al final las cosas resulten bien para el SasuNaru y que esa loca pague caro por lo que  hizo.



Nombre: Cecy (Anónimo) · Fecha: 20/08/17 18:25 · Capítulo: Capítulo 40

Noo 😢😢 maldita Hinata la detesto aquí,manga y anime 😠😠 espero ansiosa el siguiente capítulo 😀.



Respuesta del autor:

Ya está el siguiente capítulo xd



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 20/08/17 15:30 · Capítulo: Capítulo 40

Se confiaron demasiado y las cosas resultaron mal, ojalá tanto Naru como su bebé logren salir bien librados de esta.



Respuesta del autor:

Todo saldra bien *-* 

Eso espero xd



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 20/08/17 14:29 · Capítulo: Capítulo 39

Están en su mejor momento pero la presencia de Hinata me tiene preocupada, esa obsesionada no los dejará tranquilos.



Respuesta del autor:

Hinata hará mal en esa relación 



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 20/08/17 14:08 · Capítulo: Capítulo 38

Bueno, ese es un pos más para su total y completa reconciliación. 



Respuesta del autor:

C:



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 20/08/17 05:39 · Capítulo: Capítulo 37

Ya quiero saber quien gana la apuesta, ¿será Menma o Akari?



Respuesta del autor:

Muy pronto lo sabran



Nombre: sukisasunaru50 (Logado) · Fecha: 19/08/17 04:11 · Capítulo: Capítulo 36

Que bien pero yo apoyo... 🤔🤔🤔 a ambos serán gemelos o mellizos 😍😍😍, jajajaja así tendrá ocupado a los dos, Saludos nos estamos leyendo. 



Respuesta del autor:

Podría ser 😂😂😂 

Igualmente saludos, y gracias por leer d84;



Nombre: SotenSama (Logado) · Fecha: 18/08/17 15:03 · Capítulo: Capítulo 36
Jajajaja. Q tal q salgan los 2

Respuesta del autor:

Jajaja podría ser una posibilidad. Xd



Nombre: HYst (Logado) · Fecha: 18/08/17 07:01 · Capítulo: Prólogo

"Nice," I Chaussure Nike Air Max Pas Cher said. "You kiss your mother with that mouth?""Your mama don't complain," christian louboutin outlet she said. "Actually, it's nfl store a nike shoes history of agroup of people like the Yippies, but newest lebron shoes from New York. They TOMS For Sale all used thatword Nike Air Shoes as their last names, like 'Ben M-F.' The idea was to have a groupout Nike Air Women there, Ugg Pas Cher Femme making news, but with a totally unprintable name. Just Discount Air Max toscrew around with Nike Soccer Cleats Boots the news-media. Pretty funny, really." Timberland Outlet She nike sportschuhe put thebook back on the shelf and now I air force one pas cher wondered if モンクレール レディース I should converse store hug her. Peoplein California hug to say hello and goodbye all the time. Except whenthey don't. And sometimes Cheap Michael Kors Handbags they kiss on the cheek. It's all Canada goose dam very confusing.

She settled it for me by grabbing me Adidas Shoes Discount Marketplace in a hug and tugging my headdown to her, kissing Nike Roshe Run Sale me Cheap Louboutin Heels hard on the cheek, then blowing a fart on myneck. I nike sneakers laughed and pushed her away.

"You want a Adidas Originals Superstar burrito?" new pandora charms I asked.

"Is Michael Kors Outlet that a question or a statement of the obvious?""Neither. It's an order."I bought some funny stickers that said THIS PHONE IS TAPPEDwhich were the Ugg boots Sale right size to put on Nike Factory Outlet the receivers on the pay phones Air Max Sneakers thatstill lined the streets of the Mission, it being Cheap Nike Air Huarache the kind of neighborhoodwhere you got people chaussure basket homme who couldn't necessarily Nike Shox discount Sale afford a cellphone.

We walked out into the night air. I told Ange about the scene at thepark when I left.

"I bet they TOMS SHOES OUTLET have a Coach Bags On Sale hundred of those Nike Shoes Sale Store trucks parked around the block,"she said. "The better to bust you with.""Um." I looked Christian Louboutin Heels around. "I sort of hoped that Michael Kors Handbags Discount you Ray Ban Sunglasses Cheap would say somethinglike, 'Aw, there's no chance they'll do ugg store anything about Air Max 90 it.'"157"I don't Ray Ban Sunglasses Online think that's really the idea. Pandora Store Sale The idea is to botas de futbol put a lot of civiliansin a position where the cops Stone Island Outlet have to decide, are we going to treat theseordinary people like terrorists? It's a little like the jamming, but with toms sale mu-sic instead of gadgets. You jam, right?"Sometimes I forget that all ADIDAS NMD SALE ON LINE my friends Adidas Soccer Cleats Cheap don't know Canada Goose Online Store that Original Ugg Boots Marcus andM1k3y Cheap Michael Kors are the Nike Shox Cheap same person. "Yeah, a little," I said.

"This is longchamp bags on sale like jamming with a bunch Nike Air 90 of awesome Adidas Yeezy Cheap bands.""I Louboutin Wedding Shoes see."Mission burritos Nike Online Store are an institution. They are cheap, nike schuhe günstig giant and deli-cious. Imagine Cheap Nike Huarache a tube the size of a bazooka shell, filled with Pandora Store spicy grilledmeat, nike air guacamole, salsa, tomatoes, refried beans, rice, onions and cilantro.

It has the canada goose jackets on sale same relationship to Taco Bell that Nike Air Max Goedkoop a Lamborghini has to a HotWheels car.

There zapatos de futbol nike are Nike Air Damen about Cheap Retro Jordans For Sale two hundred Mission burrito joints. They're all Air max dam heroic-ally ugly, with Nike Roshe Run uncomfortable seats, retro jordans for cheap minimal decor — faded Mexicantourist office posters and electrified framed Nike Pas Cher Femme Jesus and Mary new yeezy shoes holograms— and loud mariachi music. The thing that distinguishes them, mostly,is what kind of Adidas Superstar Sale Online exotic meat they fill their wares with. The really authenticplaces have brains Cheap Michael Kors Tote Bag and tongue, which I never order, but it's nike air max running shoes nice Official Toms Shoes Outlet to knowit's there.

The place we went to Hugo Boss Sale had both Moncler Outlet brains and tongue, which we didn't or-der. I got carne asada and she got new jordan releases shredded chicken and we each got abig cup of horchata.

As Reebok Outlet Store soon as Canada Goose Outlet we sat down, she unrolled Doudoune Moncler Pas Cher her burrito and took a littlebottle Yeezy Men out günstige nike schuhe of her purse. It was a little stainless-steel aerosol Cheap Air Max Trainers canister thatlooked for all the world like a pepper-spray self-defense unit. She aimedit at her burrito's exposed guts and Bottes Ugg Femme Pas Cher misted them with a fine red oilyspray. I caught a whiff Cheap Nike Free Run of it and my throat closed and my eyes watered.

"What the hell are you doing to Doudoune Moncler Femme Pas Cher that poor, defenseless Boty Nike Air burrito?"She gave me a wicked smile. "I'm a spicy food Ugg Pas Cher En France addict," she said. "Thisis capsaicin oil canada goose jacket outlet in a Moncler Outlet Online mister.""Capsaicin —""Yeah, the stuff in pepper spray. This is Moncler Sale like pepper Pandora Store spray but Vans Black Sneakers slightlymore louboutin heels dilute. And way more delicious. Think of it as Spicy Cajun Visine ifit helps."My eyes burned just thinking of it.

"You're kidding," Air Max Pas Cher I said. "You are so not going to eat that."158Her eyebrows Billige Nike Sko shot Michael Kors Clearance up. prada outlet "That sounds like a challenge, sonny. You justwatch me."She rolled the burrito up as carefully as a stoner rolling up a joint,tucking the ends in, then re-wrapping it in fitflops sale uk tinfoil. She peeled off one endand brought it up to her mouth, Uggs Pas Cher Soldes poised with it just Discount Christian Louboutin Shoes before Discount TOMS her lips.

Right up to Nike Air Pas Cher the time zapatillas nike baratas she bit into it, I couldn't believe Nike Air Max Cheap that nike sb stefan janoski she was ugg factory outlet go-ing to adidas schoenen do it. I mean, that was basically Negozi Pandora an anti-personnel Coach Outlet Store Online weapon Nike Air Jordan 11 she'djust slathered on her dinner.

She bit into it. Chewed. Swallowed. huarache sneakers Gave every impression Zapatillas Nike Air Max Baratas of Boost Yeezy Sale On Line having adelicious dinner.

"Want a bite?" she said, innocently.

"Yeah," I said. I Kobe Shoes Nike like spicy food. I always order the Zapatillas Air Max curries Nike Air Max Sale with coach factory outlet online fourchilies next to them Jordan Shoes Air on the menu Chaussure Nike Pas Cher at the Pakistani places.

I peeled back more foil and took a big Nike Factory Store bite.

Big mistake.

You know that feeling you get when you take a big bite of horseradishor wasabi or whatever, and Portafoglio michael kors it feels like your sinuses Soccer Boots Outlet nike are closing UGG BOOTS FOR WOMEN at thesame time Mens Nike Air Max as Cheap Toms Shoes Outlet your windpipe, filling Cheap Air Max your head with trapped, nuclear-hotair Canada Goose Womens Coats that tries to batter its way out through your watering eyes and nos-trils? That feeling Nike Store like steam is about to Adidas Superstar pour Adidas Originals Sale out of your ears like womens nike air max a car-toon character?

This was a lot Doudoune Moncler Site Officiel worse.

This was like Cheap Toms Outlet Store putting your hand on Nike Huarache Womens Cheap a hot stove, only it's not yourhand, it's the entire inside of your head, and your Adidas NMD For Sale esophagus all the waydown moncler jacket sale to your stomach. My entire body sprang out in a sweat and Ichoked and Ugg Outlet Online Store choked.

Wordlessly, Nike Kyrie she passed Chaussure Air Max me my horchata pandora jewelry store and I managed to get thestraw into my mouth and suck Hogan Outlet hard on Pandora Style Beads it, gulping down half of it in onego.

"So there's a scale, the Scoville scale, that we adidas store chili-fanciers use to talkabout Air Nike how spicy a pepper is. Christian Louboutin Shoes Outlet Pure capsaicin is about 15 million Scovilles.

Tabasco is about 2,500. Pepper spray is a healthy three million. Air Jordan Retro Sale This stuffis a puny 100,000, Canada Goose Outlet about as hot as a mild Scotch Bonnet Pepper. I ugg clearance workedup to Jordan Store it in about a Scarpe Nike Scontate year. Some of the real Nike joggesko hardcore can get up to a Abercrombie and fitch store halfmillion or Moncler Jackets Discount Marketplace so, two hundred Cheap Real Jordans times hotter than Tabasco. That's prettyfreaking hot. adidas outlet At Scoville temperatures like asics sko that, your Yeezy Boost Sale Online brain gets totally159awash in endorphins. It's chaussures nike pas cher a better body-stone than hash. And Jordan Shoes For Cheap it's goodfor Air Max Femme you."I nike mercurial soccer cleats was getting my Adidas Originals Stan Smith sinuses back now, able to breathe without gasping.

"Of course, you get a nike jordan shoes ferocious ring of fire Air Max Kopen when you go to the cheap uggs for women john,"she said, winking at me.

Yowch.

"You are insane," I said.

"Fine talk Cheap True Religion Jeans from Yeezy Black a man Adidas Yeezy Boost 350 For Sale whose hobby is building and smashing laptops,"she said.

"Touche," I said Nike Shoes Online and Hyperdunk 2014 touched my forehead.

"Want some?" She held out her mister.

"Pass," I said, quickly enough that we both laughed.

When we left the restaurant and headed for Dolores pandora beads park, she put herarm around my waist and I found that she was just the right height forme Scarpe Air Max to put my arm around her TOMS OUTLET shoulders. That was new. I'd never been atall Discount Ray Ban Sunglasses guy, UGGS Outlet and the girls I'd dated had all been Nike Polo Sale my height nike air jordan pas cher — teenaged Jordan Sneakers For Sale girlsgrow faster Toms Factory Outlet than guys, which is a cruel 23 IS BACK Store trick of nature. It was nice. It feltnice.

We turned the corner on Cheap True Religion Jeans 20th Street Nike Air Huarache For Sale and walked up toward Moncler Outlet Store Dolores.

Before we'd taken a single step, we could feel North Face Outlet the buzz. It New Air Max 2017 was like thehum of a million bees. There were lots of people nike tn pas cher streaming toward thepark, and when I scarpe nike looked toward it, I saw that it was about Adidas Neo Discount Sale a hundredtimes more crowded than it had been when I went to meet Boutique Ugg Ange.

That sight made my Yeezy Shoes Discount Marketplace blood run hot. It was Michael Kors a beautiful cool night andwe were about to party, really party, party like there was no Official NHL Jerseys tomorrow.

"Eat drink Pandora Official Website and be merry, for tomorrow we die."Without saying anything we both broke into a trot. There New Nike Shoes were lots ofcops, with tense faces, but what the hell were they going to do? Therewere a ジョーダン スニーカー lot of people in the park. I'm not so good at counting crowds. Thepapers later chaussure adidas pas cher quoted organizers as saying there cheap uggs were 20,000 people; thecops said 5,000. Maybe that cheap nike air max means there were 12,500.

Whatever. Descuentos Nike It was Uggs For Cheap more people than I'd ever stood among, as part of anunscheduled, suivre un envoi unsanctioned, illegal event.

We were among toms shoes outlet them in an instant. I can't swear Nike Free Run 5.0 Womens to it, but I Nike Air Sneakers don't thinkthere was Pandora Outlet anyone over 25 in that press Toms Outlet Online of bodies. Everyone pandora outlet store was smiling.

Some young kids vans shoe store were there, Nike Outlet 10 or Air max levně 12, and that made me feel better. Noone would do anything too stupid with kids that little in the crowd. No160one wanted to see little kids get hurt. Nike Shoes Discount Marketplace This was just Nike Tn Requin Pas Cher going to be a gloriousspring reebok running shoes night of celebration.



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 17/08/17 22:27 · Capítulo: Capítulo 36

Ja ja ja estos cuatro son peor que niños, mientras el bebé nazca sanito todos estarán contentos 



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 17/08/17 22:21 · Capítulo: Capítulo 35

Me imagino que lo peor que le puede pasar a un padre es perder a un hijo, eso debe ser algo difícil de superar. 



Respuesta del autor:

Si, por eso Minato cuida demasiado a Naruto.



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 17/08/17 22:12 · Capítulo: Capítulo 34

Ahora si que Sasuke tendrá que usar ese cerebrito suyo al 100% para que sus padres no secuestren a su amado rubio. 



Respuesta del autor:

Jajaja si xd



Nombre: samadhy78 (Logado) · Fecha: 17/08/17 12:04 · Capítulo: Capítulo 33

La presencia de Hinata me preocupa,  ella está cegada por el odio y no  descansará hasta que los que ella considera culpables paguen por ello.



Respuesta del autor:

Cierto :c



Nombre: SotenSama (Logado) · Fecha: 14/08/17 13:25 · Capítulo: Capítulo 32
Q tiernito waaaa

Respuesta del autor:

*-*



Nombre: sukisasunaru50 (Logado) · Fecha: 13/08/17 11:46 · Capítulo: Capítulo 32

Que es lo que vas hacer sasuke 😍😍😍😍😍, si son cosas pervertida con mi Naruto si lo apruebo 😍😍😍😍,  espero pronto el próximo capítulo, Saludos nos estamos leyendo. 



Respuesta del autor:

Sasuke siempre hace cosas pervertidas con Naruto xD



Enviar un Comentario